Nonni Posted September 20, 2014 Share Posted September 20, 2014 I have found in going over the book that there is a need for editing, either in spelling or punctuation. Any thing that is unclear, please let me know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LilSister Posted September 20, 2014 Share Posted September 20, 2014 Nonni I would love to help, unfortunately it's not something I can commit to at this time. Not enough free time, right now I'm at work on my break. I spend my whole day in front of a computer and sometimes it's the last thing I want to do when I get home evenings. I am ashamed to say I haven't read it yet - but I will get to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nonni Posted September 20, 2014 Author Share Posted September 20, 2014 Oh, LilSister, I totally understand. There is no obligation in my request. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LilSister Posted September 20, 2014 Share Posted September 20, 2014 Nonni is your avatar the Sims 4 Version of Mrs. Crumplebottom? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nonni Posted September 20, 2014 Author Share Posted September 20, 2014 I don't know, I just clipped it out of an illustration. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators Rebecah Posted September 20, 2014 Administrators Share Posted September 20, 2014 I will Nonni, if you promise not to be upset with me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Stefy Posted September 20, 2014 Members Share Posted September 20, 2014 Nonni is your avatar the Sims 4 Version of Mrs. Crumplebottom? I know I've seen EA naming her Gladys or something. Everytime I see her she makes me laugh and I don't know why! I would try my best Nonni, but I don't really like to criticize. See, I made a lot of spelling mistakes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nonni Posted September 20, 2014 Author Share Posted September 20, 2014 I think I missed something. What are you guys talking about? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Stefy Posted September 20, 2014 Members Share Posted September 20, 2014 One thing you should know Nonni. I'm still laughing at your avatar! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators MaAlet Posted October 8, 2014 Administrators Share Posted October 8, 2014 Chapter 11: Her fine mousy brown hair would not conform to latest styles and there _ dark circles around her sad pretty eyes. (About Cynthia) missing verb Chapter 12: _Here ye go, dearie, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members broomhilda61 Posted October 8, 2014 Members Share Posted October 8, 2014 Can't help you Nonni English was my worst subject and still is Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators Rebecah Posted October 8, 2014 Administrators Share Posted October 8, 2014 Alet you are very good at this. I do however, think the last one the am would make it present tense, was makes it past tense, but then again the Now makes it present tense. I would drop the word Now in that sentence and leave it as.... I was losing the person that had given me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nonni Posted October 14, 2014 Author Share Posted October 14, 2014 Thank you all for your input. It is good to see what I had missed. When I read my own writing, my mind fills in the mistakes and I don't see them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrators MaAlet Posted November 15, 2014 Administrators Share Posted November 15, 2014 Chapter 15: Par 3: Would the top of the list would be survival? (should the second would be there?) Par 11: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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